rain at last
the white egret dances
through the shallows


—Bill Waters
        

About the author: Bill Waters
Titusville, NJ
bnwaters at verizon.net

 

Responses to the haiku for 7 August 2003 by Bill Waters

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-08-08 09:38:30
     

    bill, in feeling this refreshing moment, this will be the gist of my comment, for the moment...

  2.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2003-08-08 19:38:19
     

    Thanks, Bill. It's been very dry here. We drove further north one day, a familiar drive, and I was struck by how stressed very tall fir trees were. But the rains came, enough to reach the deep roots, I'm sure.

    I like watching the water birds, too, as you know. In your poem, "white" as a symbol of purity: how nature should be allowed to exist and continue. I know we have lots of work to do.

    Blessed weekend, Ellen

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-04 05:23:36
     

    rain filled
    puddles --
    doves remain grey, anyway


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