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Responses to the haiku for 13 August 2003 by Ross Clark

1.  
   LNH
   2003-08-13 10:37:19
    

   I like. Nice encapsulation of a paradox.
   
   ---L.

2.  
   Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
   2003-08-13 17:00:05
    

   As an artist, I imagined the scene instantly!

3.  
   Peter H Evans (Peterhphotographics at macunlimited dot net)
   2003-08-13 17:19:53
    

   Excellent! Superb summary of a life models job!

4.  
   bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2003-08-13 23:20:06
    

   sadly, a cropped sentence. sadly, this statement, seemingly self-contradictory, as lnh puts it, is recognizable, however, it is not a haiku; as marjo, instantaneously confirms the scene. a summary of a model's job does not a haiku make, as peter exclaims.
   
   the piece reads nicely, yet, all pieces are not a haiku.
   
   
   i will not attempt a remake, unless at a later date i am drawn back into this piece, by others.

5.  
   H. Gene Murtha
   2003-08-14 20:54:46
    

   love the humor in this one Ross, thanks.
   
   Gene

6.  
   myron lysenko
   2003-11-19 21:09:12
    

   ah! hello ross, good to see you. enjoyed this senryu very much.

7.  
   john tiong chunghoo
   2004-04-25 10:41:02
    

   life model
   the artist's mind
   trails into ectasy

8.  
   bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2004-07-04 06:51:27
    

   unsettling sound
   the firefly makes --
   
   small still voice
   
   
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