life model
  performs
    stillness


—Ross Clark
        

About the author: Ross Clark
Brisbane, Australia
rclarkbard at yahoo dot com dot au

 

Responses to the haiku for 13 August 2003 by Ross Clark

  1.  
    LNH
    2003-08-13 10:37:19
     

    I like. Nice encapsulation of a paradox.

    ---L.

  2.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2003-08-13 17:00:05
     

    As an artist, I imagined the scene instantly!

  3.  
    Peter H Evans (Peterhphotographics at macunlimited dot net)
    2003-08-13 17:19:53
     

    Excellent! Superb summary of a life models job!

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-08-13 23:20:06
     

    sadly, a cropped sentence. sadly, this statement, seemingly self-contradictory, as lnh puts it, is recognizable, however, it is not a haiku; as marjo, instantaneously confirms the scene. a summary of a model's job does not a haiku make, as peter exclaims.

    the piece reads nicely, yet, all pieces are not a haiku.


    i will not attempt a remake, unless at a later date i am drawn back into this piece, by others.

  5.  
    H. Gene Murtha
    2003-08-14 20:54:46
     

    love the humor in this one Ross, thanks.

    Gene

  6.  
    myron lysenko
    2003-11-19 21:09:12
     

    ah! hello ross, good to see you. enjoyed this senryu very much.

  7.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-04-25 10:41:02
     

    life model
    the artist's mind
    trails into ectasy

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-04 06:51:27
     

    unsettling sound
    the firefly makes --

    small still voice


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