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Responses to the haiku for 25 September 2003 by Ross Clark

1.  
   bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2003-09-28 00:13:53
    

   a buzz-
   too soon the apple cider
   many fruit flies drawn

2.  
   Norman Darlington
   2003-09-28 05:06:26
    

   Very effective Ross, I really like this one.

3.  
   Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
   2003-10-01 08:13:36
    

   This also brings to mind the way a single flower on my desk can become a garden in winter; a shell, the beach; a letter, a friendship; and a poem, a major life event. Thank you.

4.  
   john tiong chunghoo
   2003-12-27 07:59:54
    

   ross, some farmers would just do this;
   
   aesthetics
   leaving some apples on the trees
   after the harvest

5.  
   bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2004-07-20 17:26:10
    

   waves breaking
   beneath the pier --
   shattered boards

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