half-eaten garlic
bagel I know
that lipstick

—Rich Magahiz
        

About the author: Rich Magahiz
Dumont, NJ
Email: rmagahiz at yahoo.com
Webpage: click here

Rich notes that haiku "come close to constituting my native tongue."

Responses to the haiku for 30 September 2003 by Rich Magahiz

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-05 03:30:40
     

    one half of perfect lips
    half full, glass of cabernet...
    full-bodied

  2.  
    2003-11-20 22:31:57
     

    this one made me smile...
    interesting line breaks in
    your poem...

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2003-12-05 08:54:52
     

    his lips the same
    shade as hers
    after the strong kiss

  4.  
    ed markowski
    2004-01-13 19:28:44
     

    on time
    for the first time
    in two years,

    the beauty of
    her complexion

  5.  
    lana b
    2004-05-22 07:30:56
     

    autumn rain
    stale smell of loneliness
    from his coat

    http://community.webshots.com/photo/70842601/96831308MmzLLE

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-21 18:36:49
     

    opaque clouds
    dusk, summer storm ends --
    wisp of a quarter moon, asleep

    -

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