hearth fire burns low
a wind-blown twig
scrapes the window

—J Blain
        

About the author: J Blain lives and writes in Riverdale, NY and is a new student to the art of haiku.

Responses to the haiku for 22 October 2003 by J Blain

  1.  
    Gillena Cox (bgeecee at wow dot net)
    2003-10-23 14:35:30
     

    There is a nice contrast here between the setting inside where things are designed and put in place as one wishes; against what is happening on the outside where the twig drifts
    carefree with the wind

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-25 07:50:56
     

    embers glow in the dark
    winter winds howl ~

    my thoughts of a warmer place

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2003-12-05 08:28:13
     

    shadows
    in the night
    ghost tale

  4.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-01-20 01:13:50
     

    fireside haiku
    the scent of pine
    sharpen's with each breath

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-22 20:27:48
     

    ac's continuous running -
    will sleep come
    easier, tonight

    -

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