hearth fire burns low
a wind-blown twig
scrapes the window

—J Blain

About the author: J Blain lives and writes in Riverdale, NY and is a new student to the art of haiku.

Responses to the haiku for 22 October 2003 by J Blain

    Gillena Cox (bgeecee at wow dot net)
    2003-10-23 14:35:30

    There is a nice contrast here between the setting inside where things are designed and put in place as one wishes; against what is happening on the outside where the twig drifts
    carefree with the wind

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-25 07:50:56

    embers glow in the dark
    winter winds howl ~

    my thoughts of a warmer place

    john tiong chunghoo
    2003-12-05 08:28:13

    in the night
    ghost tale

    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-01-20 01:13:50

    fireside haiku
    the scent of pine
    sharpen's with each breath

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-22 20:27:48

    ac's continuous running -
    will sleep come
    easier, tonight