remaining heat -
footprints to and from
a sandcastle

—paul m.
        

About the author: paul m. is an award winning haiku poet whose work has been widely published. He is Treasurer for the Haiku Society of America (hsa-haiku.org) and Haiku North America (haikunorthamerica.com), as well as book review editor for Modern Haiku (modernhaiku.org).

Contact: pauldmiller at fctvplus dot net

Responses to the haiku for 24 October 2003 by paul m.

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-25 07:59:37
     

    yesterday's castle
    the remaining sand ...
    which grains were my design

  2.  
    H. Gene Murtha (Genemurt at cs dot com)
    2003-10-25 23:43:58
     

    hey Paul, nice, I really like this poem, and can
    just imagin those footprints, leading from the
    shore, back to the sandcastle. Maybe for more
    water, or just to cool off those feet.

    best,

    Gene

  3.  
    kevs
    2003-10-26 15:49:29
     

    Sand between my toes.
    Water chilly on bare skin.
    Northern water's cold!

  4.  
    STAR
    2003-10-26 17:49:47
     

    I liked the lingering of persona, envisioned by the words, "remaining heat". Some day, I hope to accomplish one, brillant haiku. LOL Thx for yours. Arlene.

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2003-12-05 08:22:48
     

    her
    laughter
    the crowd

  6.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-01-25 01:15:45
     

    my footprints on
    sandy Seychelles Islands
    azure Indian Ocean

  7.  
    martin
    2004-01-28 17:32:19
     

    autumn
    the ocean darker than beach footprints

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-22 20:59:58
     

    curtains quiver --
    through the closed window
    my empty glances

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