enjoying autumn stillness
the measured clatter
of my clogs

—john tiong chunghoo
        

About the author: i won honourable mention for the first takashi hoshino award and two honourable mentions and one merit poem in the new year kukai organised by the World Haiku Club recently. i am a regular participant of the shiki monthly kukai. my works have been published around the world such as poetry sharing journal, voicesnet.com, heron's nest, asahi shimbun, mainichi shimbun, yomiuri shimbun, sakura anthology, free times among many others. readers are welcome to read my poems at postpoems.com and poetry-today.com and to leave their messages.

Responses to the haiku for 25 November 2003 by john tiong chunghoo

  1.  
    Craig McLanachan (cramar at actrix dot co dot nz)
    2003-11-26 11:46:12
     

    I really like this John but if it were mine I would drop the 'enjoying', because your enjoyment is implied by the mention of 'autumn stillness'. great stuff!

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-11-27 18:05:52
     

    snowflakes fall
    overcoming winter silence ...
    sigh

  3.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-01-17 20:15:15
     

    lonely for her...
    the old hound fetches
    my wife's fleece slippers

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-25 20:15:41
     

    winter remembrance
    over cup of blue mountain coffee --
    summer chill

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