Bright New Years moon
the cloud
passes quickly by


—Korinne O'Laughlin
        

About the author: Korinne O'Laughlin: Chiefstar at webtv dot net

Responses to the haiku for 1 January 2004 by Korinne O'Laughlin

  1.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-01-01 18:51:36
     

    owl flapping wings
    hoots at noisy
    New Years firecrackers

  2.  
    Dirk van Nouhuys
    2004-01-01 19:05:35
     

    Real quality.

  3.  
    Narayanan (mahashishta at hotmail dot com)
    2004-01-01 21:46:20
     

    still
    the wind above
    the moon

  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-01-02 00:50:56
     

    new year's moon
    old moon beams
    fresh hopes

  5.  
    Vaughn Banting (banting3 at cox dot net)
    2004-01-02 15:54:24
     

    moving over the moon
    a pushy cloud
    takes center stage

  6.  
    Shyam (shyam at gmx dot net)
    2004-01-03 02:01:21
     

    sudden breeze ~
    spreads light ~ the moon
    flies among clouds

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-01-05 17:56:57
     

    winter, dreary and darker
    hopes for the new year ..
    after my loss

    -

    today
    the sun went away --
    it begins to rain

    -

    twilight
    all during the day ..
    teary rainfall

    -

    heat wave
    drizzling winter rain ..
    warm remembrance

  8.  
    Vaughn Banting (banting3 at cox dot net)
    2004-01-06 10:50:11
     

    Lets move away from moon and winter themes for a while. I need to warm up!

    summer day-
    worm drying on a rock
    two girls fishing

  9.  
    ed markowski
    2004-01-13 17:24:54
     

    new year's morning...
    the glare
    of a mimosa

  10.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-31 19:09:40
     

    penniless
    callous hand in his worn pocket --

    sun sets, abruptly

    -

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