snowmobile tracks
disappear behind the trees-
full moon tonight


—Helen Ruggieri
        

About the author: Helen Ruggieri lives in Olean, NY and has had publications recently in Mainichi Daily News (Japan) and Bottle Rocket.

 

Responses to the haiku for 7 January 2004 by Helen Ruggieri

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-01-07 10:41:59
     

    early alarm -
    too soon to rise
    wintry sun
    -
    cold morning breeze ~
    through the leaves
    distant moon
    -
    on final approach ..
    four white hearses
    race down the hill
    -
    tear's track
    loved one remembered -
    heard this night
    -

  2.  
    Vaughn Banting (banting3 at cox dot net)
    2004-01-07 12:38:20
     

    desert moon--
    nothing to hide
    behind

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-01-08 00:49:41
     

    a visual haiku but quite ordinary.

    autumn festival
    two moons
    at sea

  4.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-01-08 01:44:38
     

    snow covered metal roof
    natural avalanche
    onto parked SUV

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-01 15:45:21
     

    summer downpour
    tracks cross the lawn --
    thunder rumble in the distant


    -


    sudden, summer shower --
    her outline, through the sheer lawn

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