still snowing!
can't see where I walked
last night

—Tim Jamieson
        

About the author: I am Canadian, born and raised in the province of Saskatchewan and living in Winnipeg, Manitoba. I first began writing haiku in 1983, and have had work accepted in Canada, the U.S., Japan, Australia, New Zealand, England, Ireland and Belgium.

Responses to the haiku for 9 January 2004 by Tim Jamieson

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-01-09 07:47:47
     

    cold morning
    hole in the sky --
    fire on the other side

    -

    not knowing the issues
    look what i stepped in !!!
    not looking down

    -

    dark clouds
    punctuate the sky -
    raptorial silhouettes

  2.  
    gaurav
    2004-01-09 17:13:19
     

    moment caught
    night and day
    scattered all over

  3.  
    Norman Darlington (tinywords at eirmode dot com)
    2004-01-09 18:51:23
     

    Such a light hand you have, Tim. You do what so many haiku fail to: generate the wonder of it all in the reader, plus you make it look so easy!

  4.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-01-09 20:11:01
     

    raining so hard
    even the crows
    takng cover

  5.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-01-10 06:19:54
     

    silk print babushka
    caresses her loving smile
    snow flakes kiss her cheek

    snow flakes softly fell
    on the bridge that winter night
    i kissed her gently

    motionless water
    fish swim beneath your cover
    ice aquarium

  6.  
    2004-01-10 07:17:18
     

    very nice!

  7.  
    Richard Goring
    2004-01-10 09:46:15
     

    Hi, Tim.
    This is a real nice haiku - a cracking example of 'show don't tell'. Keep up this standard - and may all your snowfalls be gentle.
    Richard

  8.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2004-01-10 11:18:39
     

    First real snow
    last night

    My heart lifts
    January light

    (SMILE, Winter 2000-01, NO. 30)

  9.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-01-12 01:17:01
     

    snowing
    little girl dances
    with glee

  10.  
    ed markowski
    2004-01-12 11:26:02
     

    evening snow...
    shaking it off
    the black hound
    white again

  11.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-06-21 04:17:07
     

    White on white -
    covered by the last snowfall,
    the unseen snowman

  12.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-02 19:18:33
     

    escort of seagulls
    her ashes, tossed from the pier --
    silence


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  13.  
    Timothy Jamieson (krazykato911 at hotmail dot com)
    2004-10-08 21:09:25
     

    You have a great name!!!

  14.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-15 05:47:26
     

    grey sheet, dawn skies
    steady trickle of rain --
    baring my shoulders

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