night rain
between the wind chimes
thunder

—Ann K. Schwader
        

About the author: Ann K. Schwader, schwader at earthlink.net, lives & writes & gardens in Westminster, CO. More about her work (including haiku!) can be found at www.geocities.com/HPL4ever/.

Responses to the haiku for 30 January 2004 by Ann K. Schwader

  1.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-01-30 18:49:11
     

    breeze stirs bamboo chimes
    orchestrating music for
    dancing whirligig

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-01-30 19:12:40
     

    food for thought:

    night rain
    of the windchime's jingle ~
    punctuated by the thunder

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    falling tears
    dried by the wintry breeze -
    twin trails end on her cheeks
    -
    one, in spring
    always out of season ...
    the other, in winter

  3.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-01-30 19:51:12
     

    birds stir
    night sky splits
    illuminating earth

    curb side white water
    downpour ending
    puddles at high tide

  4.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-01-30 22:46:52
     

    furious wind
    metal chimney top
    blown into yard

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-01-30 23:54:53
     

    death anniversary
    the melancholy peal
    of her windchime

  6.  
    ed markowski (1elmako at comcast dot net)
    2004-01-31 00:55:26
     

    calm morning...
    a hummingbird
    vibrates the windchimes

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-08 17:40:40
     

    summer night breeze
    between the curtains ...
    neighbor's conversation rides

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