February 1st
working inside all day long
I forget the sky

—Kelley Jean White
        

About the author: email: KelleyWhiteMD at Yahoo.com

I was born and raised in New Hampshire, have degrees from Dartmouth College and Harvard Medical School, and have been a pediatrician in inner-city Philadelphia for the past twenty years. In the past several years I have had 850 poems accepted or published by 200 journals. My book, The Patient Presents, was published by The People's Press in Baltimore and a chapbook, "I am going to walk toward the sanctuary," was published by Nepenthe Books/Via Dolorosa Press.

Responses to the haiku for 2 February 2004 by Kelley Jean White

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-02-02 01:23:19
     

    old man
    hitting the gas, instead of the brakes ...
    in winter
    -
    murder of crows
    caws in flight ~
    dreary winter afternoon
    -
    rolling grey waves
    endless motionless clouds -
    drizzling rain upon my brow

  2.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-02-02 13:32:36
     

    she craves salty food
    looking at strawberry moon
    eating a pickle

  3.  
    Artsy (artsysf at earthlink dot net)
    2004-02-02 14:24:47
     

    creating ceramic piece
    enjoying the process
    not for sale

  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-03 00:21:32
     

    prolonged noon nap
    waking up to find
    dusk like dawn

  5.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-02-03 19:43:04
     

    february 2nd
    the cement men hunched
    in falling snow

  6.  
    H. Gene Murtha (Genemurt at cs dot com)
    2004-02-03 21:25:41
     

    Nice 5/7/5, though I really don't see the point in
    writing them, though there is nothing wrong either;
    just lazy I guess? If you're interested in the Mad Poets Soc., Media, or Virgilio Assoc., Camden, NJ. Drop me a line.

    Best,

    Gene

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-08 22:17:22
     

    wavering, strong winds
    eaglet fearful of flight ~
    same rhetoric

    -

    new sunrise
    yesterday-today-tomorrow-always
    later, sunset

    -

    indecision -
    the winds journey
    who understands the reason

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