tinywords: haiku for 5 February 2004 by Laryalee Fraser

winter sun
warming the mailbox -
a friend's letter

—Laryalee Fraser

About the author: Lary is a retired reporter/photographer, enjoying small-town life in British Columbia, Canada. Her website is "a leaf rustles".

published 5 February 2004
in haiku

Responses to the haiku for 5 February 2004 by Laryalee Fraser

Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)

2004-02-05 13:04:20

e-mail inbox full
of Valentines love
- electronic warmth
Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)

2004-02-05 13:19:13

bidding her farewell
her warm hand slowly left mine-
did i feel her heart

haiku i now write-
talking to you now that my
dreams awaken me

mail box askew
shortens the distance
to your country
Craig McLanachan (cramar at actrix dot co dot nz)

2004-02-05 22:19:46

Lovely images and clever use of two means of warming the mailbox. a "feel good" haiku that I enjoy.
john tiong chunghoo

2004-02-05 23:22:01

warming my heart
a newcomer's
excellent haiku
Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)

2004-02-05 23:40:09

water,electric,auto loan
and junk mail fill my box-
no scented mail
H. Gene Murtha (Genemurt at cs dot com)

2004-02-06 00:02:32

ain't like you're a beginner poet Lary, nice haiku.

Gene
bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)

2004-02-06 00:18:48

radio, wintry night
family gather round ...
enters the stranger
Cathy

2004-02-09 00:22:54

Bright summer morn,
thousands miles away,
but connected
by the love of haiku.
bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)

2004-08-09 21:22:20

still breeze, during the night
break in the silence
her outcries

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