winter sun
warming the mailbox -
a friend's letter

—Laryalee Fraser
        

About the author: Lary is a retired reporter/photographer, enjoying small-town life in British Columbia, Canada. Her website is "a leaf rustles".

Responses to the haiku for 5 February 2004 by Laryalee Fraser

  1.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-02-05 13:04:20
     

    e-mail inbox full
    of Valentines love
    - electronic warmth

  2.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-02-05 13:19:13
     

    bidding her farewell
    her warm hand slowly left mine-
    did i feel her heart

    haiku i now write-
    talking to you now that my
    dreams awaken me

    mail box askew
    shortens the distance
    to your country

  3.  
    Craig McLanachan (cramar at actrix dot co dot nz)
    2004-02-05 22:19:46
     

    Lovely images and clever use of two means of warming the mailbox. a "feel good" haiku that I enjoy.

  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-05 23:22:01
     

    warming my heart
    a newcomer's
    excellent haiku

  5.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-02-05 23:40:09
     

    water,electric,auto loan
    and junk mail fill my box-
    no scented mail

  6.  
    H. Gene Murtha (Genemurt at cs dot com)
    2004-02-06 00:02:32
     

    ain't like you're a beginner poet Lary, nice haiku.

    Gene

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-02-06 00:18:48
     

    radio, wintry night
    family gather round ...
    enters the stranger

  8.  
    Cathy
    2004-02-09 00:22:54
     

    Bright summer morn,
    thousands miles away,
    but connected
    by the love of haiku.

  9.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-09 21:22:20
     

    still breeze, during the night
    break in the silence
    her outcries

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