winter sunrise
the orange sky scored
by branches

—Sue Mill
        

About the author: Sue Mill, suemill at hotmail dot com
Brisbane, Australia

I have been writing haiku for about six years. I belong to one haiku group here in Brisbane and am involved with the newly-formed Australian Haiku Society (HaikuOz for short) as Publications Officer. Here is the HaikuOz Web site.

Responses to the haiku for 6 February 2004 by Sue Mill

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-02-06 00:26:21
     

    ducks at water's edge
    waggling of tail feathers -
    crisp sunday morning

  2.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-02-06 09:31:33
     

    sunrise
    ice coated birch
    bows to the east

  3.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-02-06 14:47:06
     

    puffy pink clouds
    Moorea, Tahiti, lagoon
    watery relection

  4.  
    Cheryle Jenson
    2004-02-06 19:28:54
     

    rainbow in the morning-
    a friendly wave
    from driver passing

  5.  
    Dave Wood
    2004-02-07 08:34:35
     

    Your work is always well done

    snowy daybreak
    the street lighted by headlights
    ribbon like

  6.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-08 04:22:55
     

    sunrise
    the chirp of a flock of birds
    reaches a crescendo

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-09 21:33:42
     

    dusk in winter -
    warming by the fire
    trying to see inside

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