winter carnival
a thin frost sparkles
on the ice carver's beard

—Ed Markowski
        

published in modern haiku volume34:ii summer 2003

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

Responses to the haiku for 10 February 2004 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    Michael Meyerhofer (angry_seraph at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-10 11:51:12
     

    Vivid, elegantly funny. :)

  2.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-02-10 12:43:32
     

    moon
    frozen crystal ferns
    sparkle on my window

  3.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-02-11 00:33:29
     

    carved ice sculptures
    dolfins melting down
    -cruise ship dining room

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-02-11 08:06:12
     

    wintry clouds
    ice crystals on the windshield ...
    my vivid conception

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-03-29 01:40:05
     

    his naughtiness
    the scratch mark
    still so clear

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-09 21:52:03
     

    autumn harvest -
    sleeping orange pumpkins
    glow in the night

    -


    a day in life
    white clouds billow
    no rainbow in sight

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