at the end of a blind date
the soft clicking
of our eyeglass frames

—Ed Markowski
        

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

Responses to the haiku for 25 February 2004 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-02-25 01:28:02
     

    dancing ...as if
    we had known
    each other for years

  2.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-02-25 02:40:26
     

    over espresso--
    her asl hands sign
    with boston accent

  3.  
    Artsy (artsysf at earthlink dot net)
    2004-02-25 14:34:36
     

    analyzing gallery painting
    the artist speaks to me
    ...now I paint abstracts

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-02-26 04:12:49
     

    cooing doves
    light rain and breeze in a dance ...
    at the beginning of the night

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  5.  
    Michael Meyerhofer
    2004-02-27 12:37:38
     

    I really like the "zen moment" within this haiku, but I think some excess words are diluting what could otherwise be a very, very effective poem.

    end of a blind date
    the soft clicking
    of eyeglass frames

    Just suggestions, of course! :)

  6.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-03-29 01:29:44
     

    love portion
    she works to improve her english
    to win him over

  7.  
    ELLIOTT
    2004-06-10 10:13:33
     

    __________ TO ED, THE "SOFT CLICKING", VERY
    NICE. THIS ONE IS NOT JUST NICE, WHETHER YOU KNOW IT OR NOT, THIS ONE BELONGS IN THE GREAT CLASS.
    CONGRATULATIONS.
    ____ I AM W.E.G.

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-11 18:48:53
     

    menu indecision
    LARGE WORDS
    through the magnifying glass

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