cloudburst
flecks of sun on a thorn bush

—Martin Gottlieb Cohen

About the author: Martin Cohen was born in the South Bronx somewhere on Simpson Street, went to a Yeshiva on East Broadway and Canal Street, and then lived in the South of Brooklyn, the South of Long Island, The Southern Tier of Upstate New York, The South of Manhattan, and finally South Jersey in Egg Harbor.

Martin's e-mail address: martin1223 at comcast dot net

Martin also has a weblog.

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Responses to the haiku for 4 March 2004 by Martin Gottlieb Cohen

  1.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-03-04 01:36:04
     

    thorns stand erect--
    protecting their
    ruby red treasures

  2.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-03-04 10:15:56
     

    morning rain
    my grandson fingerpaints
    his father's face

  3.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-03-04 10:54:50
     

    persimmon tree
    loaded with fruit
    ... birds' winter meals

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-03-04 21:13:26
     

    White dew -
    one drop
    on each thorn

    Buson
    -

    soft breeze rattles umbrella leaves -
    tiny wasp ponders me

    by bob

    -

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-03-05 08:11:58
     

    the canopy
    from the ground
    leaves dancing with lights

  6.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-03-07 16:57:48
     

    After the tempest,
    all around the stock-still village
    upon the wing swalows

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-15 04:32:06
     

    dew
    deposited during the night --
    on my doorstep, a yellow rose

    -

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