discarded hubcap
two sparrows bathing 
after the rain

—Gary Warner
        

About the author: Gary Warner lives in Birmingham Alabama with his wife, two children, and mother-in-law. He works with computers for a living and is the editor of haikuworld.org. His hobbies are haiku poetry, computer security, and genealogy.

 

Responses to the haiku for 5 March 2004 by Gary Warner

  1.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-03-05 00:37:56
     

    blackbirds
    and dark shore rocks
    harvest seagulls food
    ~~~~~~~~~~
    standing still--
    blue heron's
    reflection walks

  2.  
    Cheryle Jenson
    2004-03-05 02:07:32
     

    Minnesota moon,
    gliding on silver water--
    the call of the loon

  3.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-03-05 03:19:07
     

    seagulls
    squabble
    over donut

  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-03-05 08:10:28
     

    triumph
    the final kick
    at the ball

  5.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-03-05 09:59:41
     

    nightly porch guest
    throughtour winter-
    cape cod sparrow

  6.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-03-05 11:56:06
     

    seagull begs
    motel room deck
    - eats my granola

  7.  
    shirley weese (sweese at island dot net)
    2004-03-05 18:13:58
     

    blustery day
    birds hang tight
    to swaying feeders

  8.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-03-05 21:11:38
     

    early robin
    before spring thaw
    eats at burger king

  9.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-03-06 09:15:48
     

    Atsujin

    Earth and metal...                               
    although my breathing ceases            
    time and tide go on.                            
    -

    late winter reflections
    stalled rush hour traffic -
    pigeon carrying twig

    by bob
    -

  10.  
    Beth Rankin Campbell (bethrankin at hotmail dot com)
    2004-03-06 17:53:33
     

    Orchastra in spring-
    Wind conducts the daisie's dance
    To the rythm of rain.

  11.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-03-07 16:41:58
     

    Moreover the water
    the rainbow makes an attempt
    on birds' bashfulness

  12.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-15 04:44:25
     

    daybreak
    shattered predawn silence ...
    many pieces of fallen street-light


    -

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