break time
the glassblower drinks
a canned Pepsi

—Cindy Tebo
        

About the author: My poetry has previously appeared in Amaze and Sol Magazine.

Responses to the haiku for 29 March 2004 by Cindy Tebo

  1.  
    ray rasmussen (ray at raysweb dot net)
    2004-03-29 08:41:47
     

    Cindy, thanks, a nice light start to the day with your haiku on tinywords.
    Ray

  2.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-03-29 09:05:01
     

    ah, little squirrel
    drinking from humming birds cup
    i join you for tea

  3.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-03-29 09:19:10
     

    An empty tumbler-
    Both the glassblower and a fly
    quenched their thirst

  4.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-03-29 10:13:17
     

    my mouth waters for
    the zesty taste of garlic--
    my eyes for the moon

  5.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-03-29 12:00:27
     

    lunch time walk
    ...photographing
    gulls' freedom

  6.  
    Michael L. Evans (trailermike at charter dot net)
    2004-03-29 13:27:33
     

    Very nice, Cindy. One of life's little jests,
    insightfully seen by you.

    Michael E.

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-03-29 20:44:38
     

    cool spring morning jog -
    break
    from the rat race

    -

  8.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-04-05 07:38:55
     

    break time
    the waitor
    hums a tune

  9.  
    myron lysenko (myronpoet at hotmail dot com)
    2004-04-05 20:28:21
     

    floating downstream
    with the ducks
    a bottle of spring water

  10.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-04-27 19:58:07
     

    Detroit
    these days the auto workers
    are flipping burgers

  11.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-22 15:32:01
     

    anhing, wings spread --
    sun-break
    from it's morning dive

    -

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