weighted blooms -
terrace blanketed
in white

—Patricia Kelly

About the author: Patricia's weblog contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at maryschild44 at yahoo dot com.

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Responses to the haiku for 1 April 2004 by Patricia Kelly

  1.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-04-01 14:39:52
     

    busy bumble bee
    ignores my neighbors flowers
    for my rose of sharon

  2.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-04-01 15:57:19
     

    oranges on the tree
    red fox under deck spa
    -spring in California

  3.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-04-01 17:26:05
     

    spring snow
    the white tulips
    beginning to open

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-04-01 19:53:41
     

    cool spring night
    hot pursuit of meal ......
    ants scurrying

    -

  5.  
    artsy (artsysf at earthlink dot net)
    2004-04-01 22:44:44
     

    still life painting
    -spring florals
    and Easter pastels

  6.  
    s. w. wilson
    2004-04-03 09:38:14
     

    crocus appear
    songbird couples
    bicker

  7.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-04-04 06:29:34
     

    coconut plantation
    three children each sitting
    shaking on a dried nut

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-22 15:48:02
     

    raindrops
    between the umbrella tree's leaves
    mockingbird, ruffle feathers

    -


    green everywhere
    spindles of red
    rain falls, on the umbrella tree

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