daffodils bow --
thoughts of
Hiroshima

—Patricia Kelly
        

(written 4/6, Hiroshima Day)

About the author: Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.

 

Responses to the haiku for 6 April 2004 by Patricia Kelly

  1.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-04-06 00:08:42
     

    childlike faces
    with bright smiles--
    pansies hug your headstone

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-04-06 05:06:19
     

    morning, the mockingbird's song
    thoughts of the day --
    i skinned my knees

    -

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-04-06 07:25:26
     

    geraniums bow
    i remember little cousin's
    ballet steps

  4.  
    artsy
    2004-04-06 11:58:34
     

    SF Bay Bridge...
    step-daughter's tragic
    car crash death

  5.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-04-06 12:39:20
     

    hiroshima day
    the toadstools rising
    after the rain

  6.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-04-06 20:36:51
     

    red amber pendant
    with ancestral entombment--
    house fly hands in prayer

  7.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-04-10 08:47:42
     

    In the next morning
    the A-cloud pulling the day
    from the Pacific Ocean

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-22 16:04:20
     

    yellow blossoms in the puddle -
    what a difference
    a day makes

    -

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