mist
the heron balanced on its reflection

—Martin Gottlieb Cohen

About the author: Martin Cohen was born in the South Bronx somewhere on Simpson Street, went to a Yeshiva on East Broadway and Canal Street, and then lived in the South of Brooklyn, the South of Long Island, The Southern Tier of Upstate New York, The South of Manhattan, and finally South Jersey in Egg Harbor.

Martin's e-mail address: martin1223 at comcast dot net

Martin also has a weblog.

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Responses to the haiku for 20 April 2004 by Martin Gottlieb Cohen

  1.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-04-20 19:55:34
     

    bird pecking at his reflection
    - driver's side mirror of car

  2.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-04-20 21:18:56
     

    standing still--
    blue heron's
    reflection walks

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-04-21 08:20:56
     

    dewdrops, balanced
    on the tip of the grass blades

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-04-21 20:49:53
     

    sunrise --
    light mist blankets the valley

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-04-23 08:47:11
     

    Suddenly, the croak
    of a stray heron hen -
    the call of the love

  6.  
    lana b
    2004-05-21 21:54:56
     

    windy
    half torn pocket too small
    for left hand

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-24 21:39:24
     

    thunder
    her resounding heartbeats, in my ear

    -

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