red kite,
the sound of your fabric
in the tree

—Andrew Grossman
        

About the author: Andrew Grossman began the poetry database at www.poeticcopy.com to realize his goal of using poetry to communicate understanding, peace and caring among people of different religious, cultural and lifestyle beliefs. The unity between humanity and nature is for him the template for creating unity among all humanity.

 

Responses to the haiku for 23 April 2004 by Andrew Grossman

  1.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-04-23 17:30:29
     

    homemade kite
    with dads ties for a tail--
    flys higher than store bought

  2.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-04-23 18:12:00
     

    Charlie Brown's kite
    always landed in the
    "kite-eating tree"

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-04-24 15:49:00
     

    spring, predawn
    rooster crows, the black bird's squawk ...
    the sun hasten it's pace

    -

    i think it was nearly 5 in the morning, as i read
    andrew's piece
    in hindsight, this is what i recalled from the moment

    -

  4.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-04-24 18:55:20
     

    cloudless sky
    the vertical ascent
    of a weather balloon

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-04-25 03:55:14
     

    japanese kite festival
    legends fighting
    in the sky

  6.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-04-25 15:07:07
     

    homemade kite
    of Sunday funnies--
    Prince Valiant soars

  7.  
    Mary Griffith (Mary_23009 at msn dot com)
    2004-04-28 20:04:27
     

    neon nylon quivers

    before bare limbs and low clouds

    my son's kite

  8.  
    Mark Eugenio (PatuissetIsland at aol dot com)
    2004-04-30 00:48:00
     

    homemade kite
    of Hawaiian silk print--
    tree orchids

  9.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-04 13:58:30
     

    rocking and rolling
    boats anchored ...
    biscayne bay leaps from the shore

    -

    sideways stinging rain
    winds loud whispering --
    hurricane frances

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