swiftly down
a newly paved road, the moon
on a rim of haze


—Debi Bender
        

About the author: D.W. Bender (lacewing at paperlanterns.net) is Development Advisor for the World Haiku Club and the Editor-in-Chief of its online magazine, the World Haiku Review. Her personal website is Paper Lanterns. An artist and poet, Debi lives in Orlando, Florida, USA.

 

Responses to the haiku for 12 May 2004 by Debi Bender

  1.  
    Gillena Cox (bgeecee at wow dot net)
    2004-05-12 09:17:40
     

    this moon unmoving
    yet
    here and there

  2.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2004-05-12 10:55:07
     

    Clear mind
    clouded by dementia...
    crescent moon

  3.  
    israel l. balan (islobal_mx at yahoo dot com)
    2004-05-12 13:55:54
     

    under the moon
    im walking covered
    by moonlight

  4.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-05-12 16:50:42
     

    moon shadows
    caress the
    weeping willow tree

  5.  
    martin
    2004-05-12 21:11:00
     

    spring chill
    the road narrows
    at dusk

  6.  
    Sancho
    2004-05-17 13:36:44
     

    A fat man eating
    the entire cake, stomach
    surely will explode

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-19 05:16:58
     

    a new day dawns
    tropical breeze stirring ...
    though unseen

    -

  8.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO
    2004-05-20 09:24:44
     

    thirst for life
    on the road, a flat dried frog
    in jumping posture

  9.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-04 16:38:57
     

    harvest moon
    the week before --
    storm clouds blanket the evening sky

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