morning moon
the nooks and crannies
of an english muffin   

—Ed Markowski

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

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Responses to the haiku for 20 May 2004 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO (BAGIRUANG at YAHOO dot COM)
    2004-05-20 09:16:30
     

    eerie stab wounds
    the cracks and crannies
    of a hive

  2.  
    Yvonne Cabaona (YCabalona at sylvan dot k12 dot ca dot us)
    2004-05-20 11:43:51
     

    What a great visual. Good job!!

  3.  
    artsysf (artsysf at earthlink dot net)
    2004-05-20 11:49:37
     

    vibrant abstract painting
    - small pools of red
    on top of orange baubles

  4.  
    Chris R.
    2004-05-20 13:40:23
     

    It's the english muffin----never will breakfast be without a smile and a moon thought. Thanks.

  5.  
    H. Gene murtha
    2004-05-20 16:23:34
     

    Filling all the nooks and cranies of even a fermented mind:

    Being an old poet, I like show, over tell, even
    though haiku editors do not seem to have a problem
    with tell?

    Nice image Ed.

    Sincerely,

    Gene

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-21 16:07:32
     

    looking upon
    the purple flowers -
    remembered by my mind's eye

    -

    when words are employed, showing equates to telling

    a pointed finger, decisively different; though some still can't understand


    -

  7.  
    H. Gene Murtha
    2004-05-21 16:19:45
     

    Maybe Bob.

    Later, am to busy for this at the momment.

    Gene

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-21 16:39:52
     

    "maybe" says it all

    "possibly", no alluding to the impossible.

    sorry you felt my response was a rebuttal to yours, gene, however your words brought to mind the ongoing discussion of "show" rather than tell


    "maybe"

    -

  9.  
    myron lysenko (myronpoet at hotmail dot com)
    2004-05-22 00:17:28
     

    a delicious juxtaposition in this tasty poem; nicely done.

  10.  
    kate
    2004-06-13 14:16:37
     

    butter melting
    morning sun overtakes moon
    hot muffin soothes

  11.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-05 01:59:42
     

    morning, knee-deep rain
    covering the grass ...
    branches from yesterday's tree

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