morning fog
what the raven found
obscured

—Ann K. Schwader
        

About the author: Ann K. Schwader, schwader at earthlink.net, lives & writes & gardens in Westminster, CO. More about her work (including haiku!) can be found at www.geocities.com/HPL4ever/.

 

Responses to the haiku for 24 May 2004 by Ann K. Schwader

  1.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-05-24 15:26:44
     

    noontime fog
    baffles San Francisco's
    windswept tourists

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-24 19:08:58
     

    evening shower
    last of light falls --
    silhouette begins to move

    -

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-05-25 05:18:00
     

    the thumps and bumps
    an upturned beetle waves its legs
    at me this morn

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-05 02:15:54
     

    predawn downpour
    obscures what i can't see --
    even more

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