sunrise at camp
herons in flight--
I raise my coffee cup

—Tim Jamieson
        

About the author: I am Canadian, born and raised in the province of Saskatchewan and living in Winnipeg, Manitoba. I first began writing haiku in 1983, and have had work accepted in Canada, the U.S., Japan, Australia, New Zealand, England, Ireland and Belgium.

 

Responses to the haiku for 1 June 2004 by Tim Jamieson

  1.  
    John Tiong (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-06-01 11:21:20
     

    chinese tea hall
    the next table's jasmine
    patronises the scents

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-01 13:39:33
     

    one's twilight
    turning back the bed --
    but not the time

  3.  
    lana b
    2004-06-01 15:16:33
     

    winter rain
    greeting me from her bag
    spring onion

  4.  
    Cheryle Jenson
    2004-06-02 02:53:38
     

    just before dawn
    Guam's bright orange moon melts
    into palm silhouettes

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-06-03 01:18:09
     

    Moving shades
    cooling his cupful cofee...
    the birds' outline

  6.  
    2004-06-15 10:08:11
     

    mirror reflects
    shadows and lines
    coffee erases

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-05 19:50:46
     

    dawn, white ibis
    on the shore
    canal too deep for wading

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