lunch in the park
dripping hot dog relish
on a pigeon's head

—Gary Warner
        

About the author: Gary Warner lives in Birmingham Alabama with his wife, two children, and mother-in-law. He works with computers for a living and is the editor of haikuworld.org. His hobbies are haiku poetry, computer security, and genealogy.

 

Responses to the haiku for 10 June 2004 by Gary Warner

  1.  
    b'oki (bettewappner at fuse dot net)
    2004-06-10 16:25:27
     

    great one, gary - made me chuckle! keep 'em comin'.

  2.  
    Beth Rankin Campbell (bethrankin at hotmail dot com)
    2004-06-10 19:16:01
     

    Feeding the pigeons
    Brings rewards from above
    Falling on your head.

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-11 18:11:37
     

    night, in the park --
    hot dog aroma
    in the air

    -

  4.  
    2004-06-14 00:32:29
     

    fuga no makoto!!!

    kittens
    help me clean up
    the spilt milk

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-05 20:39:23
     

    park inundated --
    an ant's hasty path
    cross my patio

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