summer garden wedding
the bridal procession swelled
by uninvited ducks

—David W. Wood
        

About the author: David Wood (x2x3x4 at msn dot com) David Wood, a retired gentlemen from Ohio, writes for his own enjoyment. He has had work shown by Paperwasp, Mainichi News, Stylus Poetry Journal, Heron's Nest, Simply Haiku, and the Asahi Haikuist Network.

 

Responses to the haiku for 11 June 2004 by David W. Wood

  1.  
    2004-06-11 08:48:57
     

    vows in summer sun
    bride's designer ivory heels
    nipped by cranky ducks

  2.  
    H. Gene Murtha
    2004-06-11 16:00:08
     

    try:

    summer garden
    the bridal party swells
    by uninvited ducks

    best,

    Gene
    PS: still rolling my eyes

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-11 18:23:38
     

    fiery red blossoms
    of the smallest poinciana --
    rival the sun

    -

  4.  
    lana b
    2004-06-12 02:00:03
     

    seagulls fighting
    each time
    boy throw a crumble

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-06-12 22:02:36
     

    Wedding's end-
    a drake tries to make love to
    two ducks concomitantly

  6.  
    2004-06-14 00:34:03
     

    drunken dance
    a butterfly flits clumsily
    through my garden

  7.  
    s.w.w.
    2004-06-14 06:13:59
     

    sunlight
    translucent pansies
    wedding day

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-06 17:53:36
     

    fiery tropical flower
    her heart wilted ...
    along the garden path

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