lemon blossoms
freshly laundered shirts
on the clothesline

—Deborah P. Kolodji

Published in Acorn, Fall 2003

About the author: Deborah P. Kolodji
Pasadena, California
dkolodji at aol.com

Deborah P Kolodji is the President of the Science Fiction Poetry Association and the editor of Amaze: The Cinquain Journal.

Her work has appeared in many journals, both on and off the web. Unfinished Book, her chapbook of haiku, cinquains, and other short poems, was published by Shadows Ink Publications.

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Responses to the haiku for 15 June 2004 by Deborah P. Kolodji

  1.  
    kate
    2004-06-15 13:33:43
     

    warm breeze
    candystriped sundress dances
    leaves rustle

  2.  
    H. Gene Murtha
    2004-06-15 18:50:12
     

    Kate, this reads as 3 sentences, and your
    grammar is off a bit:

    warm breeze
    candystriped sundress dances
    leaves rustle

    Hey Deb:

    Nice haiku.

    best wishes,

    Gene

  3.  
    Beth Rankin Campbell (bethrankin at hotmail dot com)
    2004-06-15 19:07:14
     

    Throws away apple
    Because he can't have the tree
    Just leaves him hungry.

  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-06-17 13:34:06
     

    those colourful shirts
    the clothesline reminds me
    of his absence

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-06-17 23:34:22
     

    Wind from the orchard-
    on the clotherline
    parfumed shirts

  6.  
    Cindy
    2004-06-18 13:50:49
     

    weather report
    the unpicked blackberries
    dripping with rain

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-18 15:38:31
     

    crisp mountain air ~
    freshly fallen snow
    and yet, the scent of the pines

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