dawn...
cuckoo after cuckoo
after cuckoo

—K. Ramesh
        

About the author: K. Ramesh, aniram86 at rediffmail.com

I write haiku, tanka and free verse. My works have appeared in magazines and anthologies published in India and abroad. I work as a teacher in a J Krishnamurti School in Chennai, India.

 

Responses to the haiku for 16 June 2004 by K. Ramesh

  1.  
    lana b
    2004-06-16 02:15:34
     

    in fallen leaves
    wind
    walking

  2.  
    2004-06-16 02:52:36
     

    fireflies
    remnants of rain
    illumination

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-06-16 04:49:34
     

    the waves
    swish and swoop, swish and swoop
    your sweet legs

  4.  
    Marjo in San Francisco (marjosfo at earthlink dot net)
    2004-06-16 22:33:54
     

    horse's tail
    swishing & swatting
    buzzing flies

  5.  
    H. Gene Murtha
    2004-06-17 00:41:27
     

    Ah, another cuckoo haiku K! I enjoyed this poem.

    best,

    Gene

  6.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-06-17 23:43:02
     

    Silence, please!
    Let's listen
    the Ramesh's cuckoo

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-18 15:46:35
     

    twilight
    flickering fireflies --
    growing brighter and brighter and brighter

  8.  
    Saravanan B
    2007-02-07 11:51:38
     

    Nice one !!
    As a waiting Kingfisher on a pond keeps reminding your old haiku, now the cuckoo in dawn will remind this poem.

    thanks
    Saravanan B

  9.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-01 17:46:53
     

    ...wondering if k. ramesh cuckoo is kin to my neighborhood rooster, no roosters!!!

    -

    dawn...
    persistant crowing
    follows night, twilight

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