twin pines
only the moon
between them

—Bill Waters
        

About the author: Bill Waters
Titusville, NJ
bnwaters at verizon.net

 

Responses to the haiku for 30 June 2004 by Bill Waters

  1.  
    2004-06-30 04:42:44
     

    aspen gold
    shimmers gently
    in the breeze

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-06-30 06:59:36
     

    rehearsal
    each note greeted
    by an echo

  3.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-03 23:22:27
     

    A love child's visage
    stuck against the window's glass:
    the moon's clean cheek

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-04 07:20:56
     

    between the raindrops
    my sweat's saltiness
    remains

  5.  
    Cheryle Jenson
    2004-07-06 00:39:37
     

    the full moon shines on
    telephone wires stretched between
    two coconut trees.

  6.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2004-08-26 04:58:59
     

    Soulmates
    underlined words
    present tense

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-07 19:57:42
     

    umbrella tree leaves
    nary a difference between two --
    rain drops

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