summer heat
a willow tree
dips into the pond

—Betty Kaplan
        

About the author: Betty Kaplan, BKaplan297 at aol.com

Retired from the Fashion Industry. Used to arrange clothes. Now arranging words. Started to write haiku five years ago. Published in Frogpond, Lynx, Woodpecker, South by Southeast World Haiku Review and American Tanka.

 

Responses to the haiku for 15 July 2004 by Betty Kaplan

  1.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-07-15 02:13:14
     

    live concert
    the drinks twist
    in the glasses

  2.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-15 06:41:21
     

    Life boats -
    on the leaves of the sinking willow
    hanging some snails

  3.  
    Kate
    2004-07-15 08:25:01
     

    laughter
    shakes the rain
    from the willows

  4.  
    Craig McLanachan (cramar at actrix dot co dot nz)
    2004-07-15 15:57:34
     

    Betty, wonderful poem.It's praise requires very few words, superb!

    across the plains
    the river's progress ~
    rows of willow

    Craig.

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-16 15:23:54
     

    frog splash
    kids at play ...
    on the creek's muddy bank

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