a waitress
refills the sugar
the long day

—w. f. owen
        

About the author: w.f. owen (ToDrBill at aol.com) is a Professor of Communication, a founding member of the Central Valley Haiku Club of California, and a member of the Haiku Poets of Northern California and the Haiku Society of America. He publishes regularly in such journals as Frogpond, Modern Haiku and Acorn, and has received awards in the 2001 Henderson Haiku and Brady Senryu contests. In 2002, he has won awards in the World Haiku Festival R. H. Blyth contest and the California Civil Liberties Public Education Program contest sponsored by the California State Library Foundation.

 

Responses to the haiku for 22 July 2004 by w. f. owen

  1.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-07-23 04:00:43
     

    windfall
    the ants each runs with a piece
    of scattered sugar

  2.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-07-23 07:18:29
     

    Quality as usual Mr. Owen.


    Blue plate special
    "off at nine"
    the waitress winks

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-25 00:48:23
     

    her awkward hand
    spilled salt ...
    cross my shoulder

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-25 03:33:35
     

    An open window-
    the greedy flies
    portake of sweets too

  5.  
    Kate
    2004-08-02 01:51:03
     

    sushi restaurant
    sticky rice
    all that remains

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-11 14:38:11
     

    concierge
    stifles a yawn -
    red-eye

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