pears on the sill
blushing
behind lace curtains

—Sue Schneider
        

About the author: Sue Schneider, native of Sacramento California
email address: rss at lanset.com

new to writing haiku but always an appreciative audience for the talents that contribute to tinywords. will continue to explore the language of poetry in my sixth decade of life.

 

Responses to the haiku for 9 August 2004 by Sue Schneider

  1.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-08-09 15:34:54
     

    abandoned web
    captures one more----
    a quince bush

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-13 18:18:33
     

    her face askew -
    kaki persimmons
    growing wild

  3.  
    Sue Schneider (rss at lanset dot com)
    2004-08-13 19:52:04
     

    fragile rose petals
    fading to transparency
    -merciless sun

  4.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan (mahashishta at hotmail dot com)
    2004-08-14 00:44:42
     

    Thanks~

    squirrels sip
    from the angel's pond~
    a cow's thirsty call~

    three lotuses rest
    on the noon-sky-waters~
    a butterfly on each~

    an autumn leaf
    on the open lotus~
    pond turns brighter~

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-08-17 22:17:32
     

    Half-open windows-
    through the moth-eaten lace curtains
    the all-conquering sun

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-12 19:19:59
     

    silhouette --
    i visualize her
    smile

    -

  7.  
    sue schneider (rss at lanset dot com)
    2004-09-12 20:14:34
     

    her fragrance
    lingers-
    a door softly closing

  8.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-05 20:01:55
     

    white mango blossoms
    weighing down the tree--
    await march winds

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