what a yellow!
against the concrete
the yellow flower

—Israel López Balan
        

About the author: I'm a mexican buddhist with a jewish name and mayan-spanish last names, who writes japanese haiku in english... What a cocktailized world!

 

Responses to the haiku for 16 August 2004 by Israel López Balan

  1.  
    kate
    2004-08-16 14:32:40
     

    an orange dogwood leaf
    forgotten goldfish
    an early autumn

  2.  
    Tom Ashley
    2004-08-16 16:38:38
     

    A haiku very beautiful in its rawness.

    Tom

  3.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-08-16 22:47:10
     

    Out of the blue
    a precipise between the lovers...
    a yellow flower

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-21 19:27:29
     

    kiss of the buttercup
    upon her lips
    what a yellow!

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-08-23 02:42:04
     

    stars
    the twinkle
    as i close my eyes

  6.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2004-08-26 04:49:56
     

    goldenrod
    how recent
    the forsythia!

  7.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan (mahashishta at hotmail dot com)
    2004-08-31 04:06:53
     

    I agree with Tom Ashley.

    yellow flowers
    fall in twilight song~
    butterflies mizmaze~

    just above
    the dark mountain
    the full moon~

    winter air~
    church bell resounds~
    a funeral procession~

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-13 19:59:20
     

    yesterday, white blossoms
    cover the lawn
    so yellow, a plum

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