midway lightning
the funnel cake vendor
draws his awning 

—Ed Markowski
        

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

 

Responses to the haiku for 23 August 2004 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2004-08-25 07:13:05
     

    Summerfest
    all the lights
    for Stevie

    (Fleetwood Mac, "Landslide")

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-08-26 01:53:43
     

    lightning
    a spark from Edison's mind
    that brightens the world

  3.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2004-08-26 04:43:09
     

    Northern August
    lighting my first candle

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-08-29 02:36:39
     

    A gloomy room-
    the lightning of a thought
    light the vendor's face

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-08-29 19:50:25
     

    hurricane warning
    spurned red-head
    drawing the line

    -

  6.  
    martin
    2004-11-15 04:02:09
     

    Coney dawn
    a kewpie doll rolls
    in the surf

  7.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-06 10:13:50
     

    midday chill--
    'long black cherry tree bare limbs
    rumpled diversed bird feathers

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