in the rafters
a barn owl
dances

—Carla Wakeman
        

About the author: Carla Wakeman (carlawakeman at hotmail dot com) is a freelance writer specializing in animals and nature. She volunteers at a wildlife rehabilitation center and many of her haiku evolved from her work with animals. Her website is www.animal-lore.com.

Responses to the haiku for 10 September 2004 by Carla Wakeman

  1.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-09-10 21:27:27
     

    under the leaves
    the spider
    waits for night

  2.  
    bagiruang@yahoo.com (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-09-11 23:28:33
     

    evening walk
    a cockroach too slowly creeps out
    of a crevice - the feelers

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-12 08:47:45
     

    hot day --
    pigeon's tail-feathers spread
    amorous advances

  4.  
    Warren Kloner
    2004-09-12 20:56:21
     

    Where these houses are,
    I was suprised by an owl,
    back when these were woods.

  5.  
    Laine Webb
    2004-09-13 08:18:41
     

    Im not sure what to say as i dont actually no what this is but im going to try and see if what im thinking is right...kimantee
    the hummingbird dives like a bomber,stoping midflight to observe

  6.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-06 16:11:12
     

    removed from her hair
    cocklebur--
    felt through my sock

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