blush of dusk
on the lake-
goose wings slap the surface

—Amy Hartl Sherman
        

About the author: A midwesterner through and through, I live in Glen Ellyn, Illinois with my husband, two sons, and three unruly dogs. A few of my haiku have been published in The Heron's Nest, Modern Haiku and the Illinois Times. An example of a non-haiku poem may be found online at FZQ (Free Zone Quarterly). Email: leven11amy@yahoo.com

Responses to the haiku for 13 September 2004 by Amy Hartl Sherman

  1.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-09-14 06:02:25
     

    in the storm
    a solitary jogger
    runs barefoot

  2.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2004-09-14 07:41:13
     

    cosmos
    beginning to bloom
    summer in September

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-14 18:53:24
     

    dove wings clap
    rising to greet the dawn ...
    jog round the neighborhood


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  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-09-15 02:52:16
     

    full of promises
    a flock of robins
    twitting outside window

  5.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-07 05:40:03
     

    dawns chill--
    starry sky beneath rippling mirrored lake
    as roosters cry

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