passing clouds --
the horizon blurred 
in summer rain

—Carol Raisfeld

About the author: Carol Raisfeld lives in Atlantic Beach, NY USA. She serves as Director of WHChaikumultimedia, Associate Editor for Simply Haiku and as a moderator for WHClovehaiku. Her poetry and photography appear in print journals as well as online interactive PhotoHaiku galleries and magazines. Her work can also be seen on her personal website: Haiku Buds.

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Responses to the haiku for 20 September 2004 by Carol Raisfeld

  1.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-09-20 11:05:52
     

    emptied of rain
    a cloudless
    September afternoon

  2.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-09-20 15:41:06
     

    nice work carol... and 1500 miles inland...

    prairie stars
    bogie and bacall
    embrace on the horizon

  3.  
    sue schneider (rss at lanset dot com)
    2004-09-20 21:49:42
     

    deluge of rain-
    the sky opened and
    poured out its heart

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-20 22:22:02
     

    life's a blur --
    last day
    of one's last winter

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-09-22 08:46:37
     

    sea storm
    the lost
    horizon

  6.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-03 02:42:17
     

    After the summer rain,
    under the new triumphal arch
    the swallows' flying

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-09 17:27:58
     

    sunburst -
    billowing autumnal day
    blurred in teary eyes

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