your farewell gift of chocolates i taste you once a day

—Ross Clark
        

About the author: Ross Clark
Brisbane, Australia
rclarkbard at yahoo dot com dot au

Responses to the haiku for 29 September 2004 by Ross Clark

  1.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-09-29 03:40:32
     

    dawn sun
    knowing only by fact
    that it gets dimmer each day

  2.  
    Jeffrey Winke
    2004-09-29 08:48:55
     

    Ross --

    Nicely crafted....you romantic...

    Jeff Winke

  3.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-09-29 10:13:04
     

    a peace offering--
    two truffles
    and a kiss

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-09-29 12:44:02
     

    sweeping leaves on a windy autumn day
    hopelessly in love

  5.  
    sue schneider (rss at lanset dot com)
    2004-09-29 20:02:18
     

    Ross,
    I love this haiku!! Being a woman, chocolate is my middle name. Great imagry.

    sue

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-09 17:03:19
     

    her handwriting
    dried purple rose, within
    unfinished haiku

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