empty parking lot
under fluorescent streetlight
palm tree shadows 

—Nelle Stevenson
        

About the author: Nelle Stevenson lives on a cattle property in Queensland, Australia and rediscovered haiku during a creative writing workshop last year.

 

Responses to the haiku for 5 October 2004 by Nelle Stevenson

  1.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-05 07:29:53
     

    night time temple
    flickering shadows
    of gods and goddesses

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-05 18:52:24
     

    silent autumn evening -
    cicada shell of former self

  3.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-08 01:10:53
     

    Double shades -
    under the moon light
    alight street blamps

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-09 18:47:55
     

    harvest moon
    filters through the dwarf pine --
    roosting doves

  5.  
    martin
    2004-10-25 02:16:09
     

    old sailor's home
    autumn leaves fill the mailbox

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-13 23:05:35
     

    through frosted window
    frond shadow
    caressed by evening breeze

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