great gusts of wind
sweep through Yosemite Valley -
autumn leaves falling

—Bruce H. Feingold

About the author: Living in Berkeley, California, Bruce H. Feingold is a clinical psychologist and regularly published haiku poet. He plans to publish his first collection of haiku, "A New Moon," next year.

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Responses to the haiku for 12 October 2004 by Bruce H. Feingold

  1.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-12 02:16:41
     

    a gentle breeze
    the squirrels race
    the falling leaves

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-10-12 03:18:32
     

    gust of wind
    a leaf twirls, drops, sommersaults,
    slides down street

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-12 06:08:11
     

    multicolored leaves
    fading green lawn --
    child's face, puppy licks

    -

  4.  
    shirley weese (sweese at telus dot net)
    2004-10-12 18:20:11
     

    crazy fall weather
    a bumper crop
    of wild mushroons

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-14 13:56:52
     

    indian summer -
    plentiful meal
    shirley's wild mushrooms sautéed

  6.  
    martin
    2004-10-25 01:47:44
     

    crushed pumpkin
    the sun's rim dips behind the roof

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-13 22:12:54
     

    sleepless winter
    after midnight
    coo of solitary dove

  8.  
    levon machenry
    2005-05-22 13:24:50
     

    Tombstone wind
    the hangmans branch
    bends & snaps

  9.  
    prado chekov
    2006-05-20 17:42:15
     

    sunrise...
    a rock climber climbs
    the face of El Capitan

  10.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-08 08:34:33
     

    sleepy hollow
    escapes my thoughts
    this lazy wintry noon

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