raindrop circles
in the bird bath --
eating alone

—Ann K. Schwader
        

About the author: Ann K. Schwader, schwader at earthlink.net, lives & writes & gardens in Westminster, CO. More about her work (including haiku!) can be found at www.geocities.com/HPL4ever/.

Responses to the haiku for 20 October 2004 by Ann K. Schwader

  1.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-20 07:32:02
     

    park bird chirps
    how i miss the old woman
    who does not turn up today

  2.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-20 11:10:14
     

    from my window-
    two blue jays
    bathe in rainwater

  3.  
    Paul
    2004-10-20 20:11:46
     

    Don't mind all that fall.
    Condensing onto concrete,
    To sound the gutter.

  4.  
    Edmund Schwellenbach (eddybacher at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-20 22:47:26
     

    ice covered basin --
    a wren faces east
    waiting for the sun

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-21 00:58:50
     

    Clear sky again...
    The birds' bath filled
    with rain water

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-21 04:14:27
     

    ominous dawn
    blackbird's squawks from the blacken pine --
    heartbeat counts my pace

  7.  
    WEG (renga_ya at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-21 21:48:21
     

    Well, this is better than some others. I might like it better if it had an adjective somewhere.
    Still, it resonates. ---- weg.

  8.  
    martin
    2004-10-25 00:10:37
     

    Coney dusk
    the pool's cover ripples
    stringer lights

  9.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-12 20:58:24
     

    solemn evening
    coldness throughout the room -
    listen to oldies

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