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Responses to the haiku for 21 October 2004 by Jeffrey Winke

1.  
   john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
   2004-10-21 02:05:29
    

   outside the fair
   childhood memory
   fills my mind

2.  
   bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2004-10-21 04:30:22
    

   barker, resounding in the wind
   cross the vacant grounds
   the crowd's litter

3.  
   shirley weese
   2004-10-21 10:23:53
    

   october beach deserted
   tea house boarded up
   bright graffiti

4.  
   Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
   2004-10-21 10:43:26
    

   October winds-
   the last home run
   thrown back
   
   Kate

5.  
   martin
   2004-10-24 23:55:55
    

   hot bleachers
   the wind stirs the trees

6.  
   bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2005-02-07 20:02:55
    

   in season -
   the snowbirds
   return to miami beach
   
   -

7.  
   charlie rossiter
   2005-03-13 14:15:54
    

   JJ
   the old philosopher asks. . .
   are you so vain you think this response is about you? are they ever?

8.  
   sylvain moret
   2005-05-22 15:54:35
    

   is haiku poetry? some but not all?
   are all poets poets? like zen masters,
   poets never call themselves poets, who
   needs the stench of it? these days, "poets"
   are a dime a dozen. who is charlie rossiter
   anyway?
   
   
   off season
   deer return
   to the campground

9.  
   b.m.r.
   2009-02-09 16:37:10
    

   ...wondering what i was doing in 2005". and after nearly 4 years, sylvain, your question remains unanswered. akin to carly simon's "you're so vain", after 30 years we're yet wondering (who). funny thought, "it could have been me".
   
   -
   
   in season
   bougainvillaea blossoms--
   never seem out of season

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