autumn mists
the mountain
disappears

—Barbara A. Taylor
        

About the author: Barbara A Taylor, Mountain Top, NSW Australia, is a regular poet at Live Poets' evenings and has published prose and poetry on various ezines. Her poetry can be heard at http://batsword.tripod.com

Responses to the haiku for 5 November 2004 by Barbara A. Taylor

  1.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-11-05 00:32:06
     

    So many dewdrops
    on the blades of grass...
    Indian Summer

  2.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-11-05 06:43:48
     

    vanishing moon-
    autumn sun peeking
    through the clouds

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-11-05 15:07:35
     

    harvest moon, higher than usual,
    my emotions, tonights
    walk on the beach,
    in the shadows, of her eyes ...

  4.  
    martin
    2004-11-05 22:48:06
     

    the mountain top dimples under the strider's leg

  5.  
    Patricia Stott
    2004-11-06 08:01:51
     

    funeral procession
    autumn fires
    birds line the way

  6.  
    d.d.swartz
    2004-11-08 12:29:43
     

    inhale, exhale
    another mountain looming
    vapors of my life

  7.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-11-11 04:45:28
     

    bright heads
    little weeds
    gathering mist

  8.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-11-12 22:44:03
     

    Country road-
    the sounds of horns
    tear the mist

  9.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-01-30 14:38:21
     

    magician's wand -
    wispy smoke cross the dawn
    pines reappear

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