returning home
three hours older--
clock strikes twelve

—Jörgen Johansson
        

About the author: My name is JÖRGEN JOHANSSON, living in Lidköping, Sweden, and I'm a member of the on-line CHERRY POETRY CLUB. I wrote my first haiku in April, 2001, and started, of course, to write in my native language, publishing a couple of haiku "pamphlets" on my own RIVER MAN publ. co. In March of 2003 I wrote my first haiku in English, and haven't looked back since; i now write DIRECTLY into English.

Responses to the haiku for 17 November 2004 by Jörgen Johansson

  1.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-11-17 06:33:43
     

    autumn chill-
    feeling twice
    my age

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-11-18 02:59:31
     

    feeling how fast
    time has passed
    three hours after forty years old

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-11-18 08:52:28
     

    my first twilight
    the passage of time -
    bright sunrays this autumn morn

  4.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-11-18 12:19:56
     

    birthday balloons...
    the one that doesn't deflate
    bursts

  5.  
    Keiko (cutynadeshiko at yahoo dot com)
    2004-11-18 14:17:01
     

    echoes of silence
    running through the larch grove
    transparent morning

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-01 18:20:14
     

    thoughts of home
    off in the distant --
    field recently planted

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