wind and winter rain
the bus shelter
chatters

—Erin Noteboom
        

About the author: I've just published my first book, Ghost Maps: Poems for Carl Hruska, which won the CBC Canadian Literary Award and is currently short-listed for the League of Canadian Poets award for best book of poetry by a woman. I live, as you might guess, in Canada -- in Kitchener, Ontario. Haiku are an old passion for me.

I keep a daily weblog at www.vividpieces.net, and can be reached by e-mail at erin (at) vividpieces.net

Responses to the haiku for 10 December 2004 by Erin Noteboom

  1.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO
    2004-12-11 07:54:45
     

    dusk
    the returning birds
    chatter louder than us

  2.  
    gerry bravi
    2004-12-11 14:32:25
     

    late night rain
    an unmoored canoe
    chatters endlessly

  3.  
    eric rupley (paris_hai at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-11 15:04:03
     

    gray snow slush,
    stepping up the bus door --
    our boots' sound.

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-11 17:35:47
     

    midday sun bath
    dark corner beckons --
    gus

    -

    dog days, a memory
    raindrops invade my dreams

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    ghost
    shadowy movement, corner of the eye
    chills the heart

    --

    intriguing work, erin

  5.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-13 09:04:18
     

    chattering of teeth-
    the bus is
    late again

  6.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-12 20:36:58
     

    memories, and aging pains-
    winter dawn brings hope
    of one more spring

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