bobbing up and down--
an empty perrier bottle
in a stagnant pool


—L. L. Moore
        

About the author: L.L. Moore is a 26 year old law school graduate from Northern California who passes the time studying for the bar exam and attempting to write Haiku and other short forms of poetry.

Responses to the haiku for 10 January 2005 by L. L. Moore

  1.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-01-10 17:15:48
     

    week old rainwater-
    two cardinals
    take a bath

  2.  
    Michael Moore
    2005-01-10 22:46:35
     

    Low tide
    seashells beached
    by the moon.

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-01-11 04:02:50
     

    the final hour
    winter sunset --
    no lights from within

  4.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO
    2005-01-11 04:03:49
     

    sprinting
    down river
    an empty plastic bottle

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-01-28 17:23:21
     

    her ruddy cheeks
    mirrored in frozen lake ...
    colorful aurora

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